Not bad... Not bad at all!
This, I'd have to say is one of my favorite versions, however its not perfect. (I'm going to apologise beforehand for rambling) To start off your voice isn't bad at all, yet it sounds like you are holding back (I don't know if it's just me). Both distortions, though well chosen didn't have enough "thump" for my taste, maybe up the eq in the 62-500 area?
P.S. I really did like it, (gonna vote 5). I just hate it when people give me advice but don't tell me how to achieve the desired sound/effect/whatever. Don't mark me as one of those people who like to make themselves seem intelligent on the internet please!
-Rock on \m/
Quoteman